I LOVE the personification of raspberries in this poem, and the whole framing of using this journey of selecting/picking them as a frame for your state of mind. LOVE it.
"Despite their quandary
with the sun, they scream at me
that they’re not ready."
so delighted to see your creativity coming out in this series!!
I always know it’s you as soon as I start reading! “What do they know?” Love that line!
I LOVE the personification of raspberries in this poem, and the whole framing of using this journey of selecting/picking them as a frame for your state of mind. LOVE it.
"Despite their quandary
with the sun, they scream at me
that they’re not ready."
so delighted to see your creativity coming out in this series!!