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Zane Paxton's avatar

Beautiful poem. And congratulations of the writing news, how exciting!

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Thanks, Zane for your encouragement to share one more on this subject! 👏🏼

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Julia McMullen's avatar

Your poem is absolutely gorgeous. What a gift God’s given you, and I’m so grateful you share it here. 💛

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Thank you, Julia🥺❤️

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Joel Adcock's avatar

Thanks for sharing the personal narratives—surely not easy. The words were already gorgeous but that made it special. I could connect to something weighty, lovely, and healing when I read it. 🙏

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Thank you, Joel. The poem needed the backstory, I think it definitely makes it come to life 🙏🏼

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Bethany Peck's avatar

Very poignant poem, Rosa. I am so sorry for your loss, too, and so glad we can know the love of our Maker in such painful times.

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Amen, thank you Bethany❤️‍🩹

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Kassi Wilson's avatar

The poem is so lovely and I love mourning dove’s. They are magical and shy.

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

I love them, too. They’re gentle 🥹

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Taylor Blayse's avatar

Absolutely stunning Rosa!

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Thank you Taylor! ❤️

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L. Adams's avatar

Mourning, then returning. Yes, I am glad to be human.

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹 we share these feelings, L.

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Melody Trowell's avatar

I don't believe in coincidences either. This poem is beautiful, Rosa! "I am glad to be human" caught me.

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Rosa Lía Gilbert's avatar

Thank you, friend❤️ always grateful for you

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Claire Adderholt's avatar

I grieve for and with you in your loss, friend (super late with this but this post just came across my feed). and what a really INCREDIBLE symbol God gave you thought with the mourning dove.

also this is extraordinary -

and take a little while. Linger here

beside my branch now lonely.

To be human, not dove—love,

mourn, then return to our shared Maker

that which is no longer my own.

I love your work.

and CONGRATS on the publications!!!

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Noah Bartley's avatar

I recently left a comment on this poem, but I just wanted to let you know that this poem encouraged me to write a poem of my own regarding my family’s recent miscarriage. Thank you for your honest and vulnerable writing!

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

This is beautiful. I returned several times to:

"How quickly do animals forget

their own making? How do these creatures

cope with loss? By undoing nests?

Leaving the rest up to their Maker?"

I'm sorry for the loss of your little one. And I am in complete awe of all your publications--you inspire me!

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Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you for sharing these beautiful, yet difficult, words. My little family just experienced such loss. This poem helped me put my own emotions into words. Just shared with my wife!

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Megan Willome's avatar

The Lord always sends birds, when needed.

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