I love this. Totally resonated. We were visiting rural PA last week and I was completely overwhelmed with the amount of fireflies lighting up the hay fields. Livng in South Florida I think I have only seen a handful of the little marvels in my whole life. Magical is just the right word
Definitely in the city over here (Kansas City), but still the Midwest! I felt like I rediscovered fireflies last week when I looked out my bedroom window and saw them lighting up the yard. It took me back to childhood. They are so magical ✨
I'm a girl in love with cities but you captured what I loved in the years I spent living in Kansas—there is something about the Midwest, and more rural American areas in general, that's hard to name but is a sweet kind of longing and contentment all wrapped up together. And you did a beautiful job putting it into words!
Also, where in the PNW are you going?? I'm headed to Vancouver this fall so maybe we'll be closer! And I'm very excited for the title announcement. :)
I loved the nostalgia I could sense from your every word. Ohio welcomed you and now you said goodbye, but also thank you in such a magical way, by highlighting its unique beauty, and the simple things that caught your eyes.
As a firefly lover myself I replayed the video more times than I’d like to admit. So pretty!
Sending blessings and so much love to you, the family and your writing heart.
Such a lovely poem, Rosa. A beautiful farewell. I can’t imagine a summer without fireflies (who knows, with climate change they may show up in the PNW soon, tho I hear they are in danger of not surviving it), but I am sure there will be other bits of magic where you are heading! And…what?? You have a poetry collection coming out soon? That’s so exciting! I can’t wait to hear more!
a beautiful poem Rosa. I love fireflies and endless cornfields. I first experienced fireflies in the South in my adult hood and love that I live here now.
Rosa, this is beautiful and captures perfectly both the magic and mystery of fireflies. This Southern California/West Coast gal was gobsmacked the first time she saw fireflies--in Central Park-- and many many years later north of Chicago at a midsummer picnic.
Definitely one of God's more amazing miracles.
You and Jim will be in my prayers as you transition this way. xo Jody
I loved the description of the cornfields lit up by the fireflies! You captured the moment well.
“When cornfields light up like stadiums” is brilliant!
But what about magic?
What about mystery?
I love this. Totally resonated. We were visiting rural PA last week and I was completely overwhelmed with the amount of fireflies lighting up the hay fields. Livng in South Florida I think I have only seen a handful of the little marvels in my whole life. Magical is just the right word
"How it can make us sit with darkness
just long enough to interrupt it. "
My favorite line.
Beautiful!!
What a magical poem Rosa✨
Definitely in the city over here (Kansas City), but still the Midwest! I felt like I rediscovered fireflies last week when I looked out my bedroom window and saw them lighting up the yard. It took me back to childhood. They are so magical ✨
I'm a girl in love with cities but you captured what I loved in the years I spent living in Kansas—there is something about the Midwest, and more rural American areas in general, that's hard to name but is a sweet kind of longing and contentment all wrapped up together. And you did a beautiful job putting it into words!
Also, where in the PNW are you going?? I'm headed to Vancouver this fall so maybe we'll be closer! And I'm very excited for the title announcement. :)
You’ve captured the beauty of these summer evenings, speaking as an Ohioan.
Rosita,
I loved the nostalgia I could sense from your every word. Ohio welcomed you and now you said goodbye, but also thank you in such a magical way, by highlighting its unique beauty, and the simple things that caught your eyes.
As a firefly lover myself I replayed the video more times than I’d like to admit. So pretty!
Sending blessings and so much love to you, the family and your writing heart.
Lovely :)
Love this! You nailed it, Rosa.
Such a lovely poem, Rosa. A beautiful farewell. I can’t imagine a summer without fireflies (who knows, with climate change they may show up in the PNW soon, tho I hear they are in danger of not surviving it), but I am sure there will be other bits of magic where you are heading! And…what?? You have a poetry collection coming out soon? That’s so exciting! I can’t wait to hear more!
a beautiful poem Rosa. I love fireflies and endless cornfields. I first experienced fireflies in the South in my adult hood and love that I live here now.
Rosa, this is beautiful and captures perfectly both the magic and mystery of fireflies. This Southern California/West Coast gal was gobsmacked the first time she saw fireflies--in Central Park-- and many many years later north of Chicago at a midsummer picnic.
Definitely one of God's more amazing miracles.
You and Jim will be in my prayers as you transition this way. xo Jody
I love this poem so much that I wish I penned it myself! 🤣
Beautiful job!!!
Wanna do a sacred poem collab post soon? 😃