I love the way this line, in its simplicity and brevity, contrasted with the longer, descriptive lines. That's something I've been playing with too - the contrast of spare vs lavish. Your final line also reinforced that contrast. Beautifully crafted!
Such beautiful, strong imagery 🥭
"A foretaste
of sweetness to come."
I love the way this line, in its simplicity and brevity, contrasted with the longer, descriptive lines. That's something I've been playing with too - the contrast of spare vs lavish. Your final line also reinforced that contrast. Beautifully crafted!
A sign of my mouth’s delight…beautiful!