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Melissa's avatar

Beautiful Rosa ❤️❤️❤️

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SG's avatar

“You set its limit,

knowing just when the time is right

to interrupt death with life.”

So powerful.

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civil winters's avatar

"just as long as you return with it." a wonderfully honest and beautiful line. thank you so much for including my prose here as well! happy solstice and celebration of light savoured, and hoped for, on the darkest of nights! <3

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Mark Rico's avatar

Love this:

"This is the day of your visitation, for you

are master over darkness. You set its limit,

knowing just when the time is right

to interrupt death with life."

... and thanks for the shoutout!

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Tristan Dueck's avatar

This is beautiful Rosa! And I love it when you include a voice recording🤍

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Bailey Gillespie's avatar

I really enjoyed this and your narration! Always love it when a writer offers a spoken version of their poetry or prose. 💛🌙

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Kassi Wilson's avatar

I love the format and flow of this poem!

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